... couple things on a re-read.

The edits by the WIN Magazine staff eliminated two texts from the first section of the story that was the hook. That was more than just one text from Matt Small.

Secondly, on an edit to cut this down to length, I shorted the word "men's" from the All-American total. Sailing and field hockey have more All-Americans than wrestling.

I must have written that 6-7 times before I got it all down. Andy Hamilton, the awesome guy that he is, helped me trim and edit.